Ok my take;
Well you have a really strong groove, you kept the pocket nicely...Watch your fills make sure they are as on point as your pocket... All fills have to always be in the pocket not just the groove playing... As for white and black music there is a difference on the way there played but who said that you cant mix the two BUT its always good to know the true fundamentals of the way a style of music is played or you do end up sounding like house ****** at an all white dinner party, and man some of those fills had you sounding like a house ******.
Im not out to tear you down man, I play and produce more contemporary Christian music then gospel..Hmmm no its about the same but Ive had years and years of it. Right now Im revisiting modern country music... Some of the sloppiest playing but it fits the music. Some of gospels best sound like a bunch of house ******* when they have to step into the so called white market too, its not just you.