LGM im writing a song and i need your help

[MackyT5]

whats up LGM its MackyT5 aka Young Tmack from the OK thats right Oklahoma and no we dont still ride horses down here lol but yea im tryna be like yall and do it big at 15....dont get mad at me cuz....i cant read music but im doin the best i can...but yea i need help with the writing of this song

its a remake if you will of cant nobody do me like jesus....Its in Db and right now it

it goes like

Gb/BbBEbGb
Gb/BbBEbGb
Cant nobody
F/AbCDbF
Gb/BbBEbGb
Do me like Jesus
Gb/BbBEbGb
Gb/BbBEbGb
Do me like the
F/ADbEbAb, F/ADbEbGbAb LOOOORRRDDD
 then go back to the top



all of you song composers tell me what to do next

[MackyT5]

oops i wrote my own bass wrong lol.....here it go

B/BbBEbGb
B/BbBEbGb
Cant nobody
Bb/AbCDbF
B/BbBEbGb
Do me like Jesus
B/BbBEbGb
B/BbBEbGb
Do me like the
F/ADbEbAb, F/ADbEbGbAb LOOOORRRDDD
 then go back to the top

[4hisglory]

I will take a look at this when I get home.

[PianoWizard]

Can't wait till I get infront of my board and trt this. Thanks for sharing "MackyT5".

PianoWiz...

[MackyT5]

ok LGM im sorry i left some thing else out lol....sorry

B/BbBEbGb
B/BbBEbGb
Cant nobody
Bb/AbCDbF
B/BbBEbGb
B/BbBEbGb
Do me like Jesus
B/BbBEbGb
B/BbBEbGb
Cant Nobody
Bb/AbCDbF
B/BbBEbGb
Do me like the
F/ADbEbAb, F/ADbEbGbAb LOOOORRRDDD
 then go back to the top



im sorry yall im just really excited cuz this is my first song ya kno